Copywriting Tip: Beware The Adjective Menace
Copywriters need to show — not tell. Adjectives tell.
I used to think adjectives were fairly harmless…friendly little words you’d sprinkle through your copy like chives in a salad.
But now I agree with Henneke Duistermaat, who calls them “a copywriter’s nightmare.”
Adjectives are like little opinions. If you think about it, it’s hard to find an adjective that’s truly objective.
“Large” and “small” are definitely relative. My first dog weighed 35 pounds, which seemed huge after a lifetime of owning cats. Later I realized she’d be at most a “medium.”
When marketers use adjectives to describe themselves or their offers, they come across as the marketer most of us want to run away from. Describing yourself as “state of the art” sounds boastful at best.
What can you do instead?
Writing in Fast Company, Ryan Clancy offers the tip I wish I’d created first: Replace your adjective with a story.
“She was a good leader.” OK. Why not share a story about the time she took on a failing project and turned it around?
With the right stories, Clancy says, “your audience just may conclude on their own that you are innovative, or strategic, or whatever else you want to be…”
